Directions: Revise these sentences to state their meaning in fewer words.Avoid the passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses.Write the answer in the space provided after each item.example;redundant: some people believe in capital punishment, while other people are against it; there are many opinions on this subject.
revised: there are people who are for and people who are against capital capital punishment.
it is expected that the new schedule will be announced by the bus company within the next few days