Subject: save the whales!
claim: cell phones should be allowed in schools because banning them is no longer universally accepted as the best policy.
which would be the most appropriate subject line for the e-mail with this claim?
your policy is terrible cell phones as an educational tool help! students are at a disadvantage! you should know that . . .professor crest, i know you are really busy and everything, but i was hoping that you could spend more time thinking about how to save the whales. it’s up to us to speak up on their behalf. it’s really wrong that some amusement parks use these poor, defenseless animals for recreational purposes. this must be stopped, and you’re the person to do it! ttyl, jules which revisions would make this e-mail more formal?
a. removing the contractions
b. removing the exclamation points
c. removing the salutation
d. removing the slang and casual speech
e. removing the information about amusement parks