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Tyler wants to write a story about a stormy day at sea. He is brainstorming a list of ideas for his story.
Which list best uses words that appeal to the senses?
1. The ship was traveling to an island.
The island was in a faraway land.
Clouds started to cover the sky. The water got rough. There were many waves.
The storm was bad. There were a lot of waves. The ship almost sank.
O2. The beautiful ship was traveling to a green, tropical Island.
Large gray clouds gathered in the sky. They blocked the warm rays of the sun.
The storm marched in and tossed the ship back and forth like a toy. The huge waves slammed into the ship and rocked it back and
forth.
03. The ship was going to a faraway land.
The sun went behind the clouds. Rain started falling from the sky.
The storm got in the way of the ship's journey. The ship had to travel over the waves. It was hard.
4. A ship was going to an island that was faraway. No one had ever been to the island before.
All of a sudden, it started to rain. The rain was heavy.
The ship moved along in the water. It had to move slowly because the storm was dangerous.
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Aaron Sherod Burks, ID#*****59
Growth: Language 2-12 GA 2015
Question #28