Many arts, including painting, fiction, poetry,
and theater, made the Harlem Renaissance
special. However, music holds a special place
in its history. Black artists developed new
styles of music such as jazz. Featuring a new
style of piano playing, jazz was a refreshing
take on an old sound. Jazz began to attract
many new fans.
Review the model paragraph. How many of the
same revisions did you make?
I made all of the same revisions.
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