Parallel: The dinner was delicious, fast, and filling. (all adjectives) Non-Parallel: The dinner was delicious, fast, and it filled us up. Parallel: The shopping list included bread, cheese, and apples. (all nouns) Non-Parallel: The shopping list included bread, cheese, and to buy apples. Parallel: My doctor wanted me to rest, hydrate, and eat. (all verbs) Non-Parallel: My doctor wanted me to rest, stay hydrated, and have eaten. Parallel: When driving in the snow, one must drive carefully, slowly, and defensively. Non-Parallel: When driving in the snow, one must drive carefully, slow, and be defensive. Directions: Read the sentences below. If the sentence employs parallel structure, write P on the line next to it. If it does not, write NP. Underline or highlight the non-parallel part of the incorrect sentences. Write your correction above it. 1. My yard measures 50 feet wide and 30 feet long. 2. The employees were tired, hungry, and had worked hard. 3. She brought her sleeping bag, a lantern, and a fishing pole. 4. Taking a plane to Montana would be easier than if we drove. 5. My sister's homework list was long and included typing a report, a project she needed to finish, and studying her vocabulary words. 1. 2. NP 3. 4. 5. 6. 6. He answered thoroughly, quickly, and correctly. 7. The acting in the movie was bad, but the writing was worse. 7. 8. When she went to the ranch, she learned how to ride a horse, rope a steer, and made biscuits in a cast iron pan. 8. 9. 9. Her dogs were obedient, loud, sweet, and love to play. 10.The music was uplifting, joyous, and inspired me. 10. 11. The construction crew framed the house, nailed drywall, and need to install lights. 11. 12. We drove across the bridge, found a spot to park, and started our hike. 12. 13. She needed new sheets, silverware, and to get a welcome mat. 13. 14. To me, the symbol stands for being free and friendship. 14.
