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Great start Kahmilia!
I do appreciate you attempting this assignment. You need to
write, from your voice, if you think skateboarding should be
banned in a park.....You can choose any park. Make it 3
paragraphs. Intro Body, closing
Should it be allowed or not? Tell us, and revise this. You have
submitted copied info and it does not make sense.
I would love to see you work on this and re-submit once you
are ready. :-) Thanks so much,
Ray Lebert