There seem to be several problems with your essay. I
suggest making changes to your writing. There are parts
of it that are unclear. There seem to be several words
that need to be defined, and some examples would also
help your essay. Basically, you need to explain things
more.
Read the peer review. What should the reviewer do to
make the feedback more helpful?
O Tell the writer to ask someone else to review the
essay.
Suggest providing more examples and adding more
sentences.
Ask the writer to rewrite the essay because there
are too many things wrong with it.
O Suggest how to clarify specific parts of the essay,
and state which words need to be defined.