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Advanced
ng Elements
18-20 points
s/Introduction
opment
Introductory paragraph contains a strong
thesis statement that clearly defines a
position on the topic.
Paragraph is well developed and gets
readers' attention.
Meets Expe
16-17 point
Introductory
thesis stater
on the topic:
Paragraph
gets reader
Body paragraphs offer excellent support Body parag
around the ideas of:
around the
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Onal Response Essay
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the life you plan on living
⚫ comparisons to your current life
.
comparisons to how most
Americans live their lives now
Paragraphs are all well informed with
research and background readings.
Personal experiences or observations
are included and integral to the essay.
Figurative language, diction, and syntax
are used to enhance the power of the
writing.
The writing displays a clear
organizational structure that enhances
the purpose of the essay.
Essay contains few if any errors.
Writing is tight, focused, and clear.
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