Read the following paragraph.
Students attending schools with mandatory uniform policies experience less pressure than do students who
must choose their wardrobes. This is because school
uniforms allow students and their parents to save money
and time. The financial investment in uniforms at
the beginning of the school year is far more economical than
the purchase of an entire wardrobe of designer
clothes and trendy styles. Students who do not have to
deliberate what to wear each
morning are able to invest their time in more productive ways, such as studying for
tests or finishing homework. Uniforms
may stifle students' self-expression, but there are many other ways to
reveal one's individuality at school.
Which revision would best strengthen the author's main argument?
the omission of the author's point of view
the addition of more general statements and ideas
O the correction of spelling and punctuation errors
O the inclusion of reputable sources and specific facts