The sweater is knit. The sweater is red. The sweater is small. The sweater doesn't fit my brother :
A) The sweater is knit; the sweater is red; the sweater is small; the sweater doesn't fit my brother.
B) The sweater is knit, and it is red, and it is small, and it doesn't fit my brother.
C) The small, red, knit sweater does not fit my brother.
D) No revision needed.