4a. Correct Your Own Writing
Collect some of your graded work that identifies comma splice and run-on errors. Correct all marked errors and look for others to correct as well. Bring this revised work to the DLA tutoring session.
If you do not have your own essay to work with, please complete the supplemental activity below (4b).
☐ 4b. Sentence Correction
Read the following sentences and identify whether each is a Comma Splice (CS), Run-on (RO), or correct (C). If there is an error, correct it using one of the methods discussed above. The first one has been done for you.


CS
1. Many of the world’s biggest festivals are based on religious foundations, they focus on a special occasion of feasting and celebration.

2. One major festival that is celebrated by Hindus is Holi this festival is also known as the “Festival of Colors.”

3. Holi takes place in March every year, it is observed by Hindus and Sikhs.

4. With bonfires being lit and colored powder and water being thrown at one another, it is truly an unforgettable sight to see.

5. The bonfires also hold significance to the Hindu celebration, they represent the devotion of Prince Prahlada to the Hindu god, Vishnu.

6. Because Prahlada’s parents disapproved of his faith to Vishnu, Prahlada was punished and forced to sit in a bonfire.

7. The prince was protected by Vishnu, he safely sat in the fire unharmed and did not burn.

8. According to the National Geographic website, “Holi usually marks the happy transition from harsh, dark winter to brighter, warmer springtime.”

9. The festival also represents a time of change and forgiveness the cultural significance of this day encourages people to kindle new friendships and rid themselves of their past mistakes.

10. Holi brings various groups together it has been acknowledged as a time where social differences are relaxed.