Read the following passage, which contains a shift in tone:
The third reason it is vital that we do everything we can to preserve
Whitcomb Park is that it has a profound place in Whitcomb's history.
Not only was it the site of a ridiculous Civil War battle, but it was the
place where football legend Tony Potts first tossed around the old
pigskin with his pops. What a double whammy, right?
Which of the following revisions best corrects the shift in tone and maintains
a formal style throughout?
A. The third reason it is vital that we do everything we can to

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GinnyAnswer GinnyAnswer · Answer 1 · 2024-05-22T14:01:09-04:00

The passage requires a revision to maintain a formal tone throughout by rephrasing key details.

The revision that best corrects the shift in tone and maintains a formal style throughout the passage is as follows:

A. The third reason it is vital that we do everything we can to preserve

Whitcomb Park is due to its profound place in Whitcomb's history.

It served as the site of a significant Civil War battle and holds sentimental value

as it was where football legend Tony Potts first played catch with his father.

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