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miri Ganz
mrs Adler
Twenty Thousand
Leagues Under the Sea
writing
final draf
My eyes were closed and my breathing was
heavy when suddenly I lost *consciouseness
When my minds eye opened what I saw was
terrifying, because the only thing that scares
me more than seeing something * frightening is.
not seeing it at all. Soon realization hit me. I
was in the dark deep depths of the ocean with.
the surface thousands of leagues above me.
I swam erratically, not knowing which way was
up. Then I spotted a big blur, but I couldnt
quite identify what it was. I swam +wards it
and it moved. My heart went on over drive,
beating loudly, I was scared it would give me
away. Once I calmed down I followed it trying
to make out what it was. I wondered when ide
become such a fast swimmer, but a quick glance
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miri Ganz
mrs Adler
Twenty Thousand
Leagues Under the Sea
writing
final draf
My eyes were closed and my breathing was
heavy when suddenly I lost consciousness
When my mind eye opened what I saw was
terrifying, because the only thing that scares
me more than seeing something frightening i
not seeing it at all. Soon realization hit me. I
was in the dark deep depths of the ocean with
the surface thousands of leagues above me.
I swam erratically, not knowing which way was
up. Then I spotted a big blur, but I couldn’t
quite identify what it was. I swam towards it
and it moved. My heart went on over drive,
beating loudly, I was scared it would give me
away. Once I calmed down I followed it trying
to make out what it was. I wondered when I
Became such a fast swimmer, but a quick glance (add more two it so far it’s really good)

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