The revision of the Declaration of Independence conveys a more intense and condemning tone compared to the draft, emphasizing the severity of the king's actions.
The revision's tone in the Declaration of Independence differs from the draft's tone in its intensified condemnation of the king's actions, using stronger language and emphasizing the atrocities committed. The revision creates a more impactful and emotional tone by highlighting the severity of the situation and the unworthiness of the king.
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